Sunday, January 1, 2012
What do you think of this Poem?
Well, I read it three times before attempting to comment. First, the structure is consistent, the rhyming not strained, the grammar good. It drives and moves very well. But I still do not understand the character. In one verse blood calms her, in one it cannot ease the bitter lust, and in one it killed her. I get the impression she has lived many lifetimes on this plane, but I'm not sure. It's very Poe-etical, if you'll forgive the pun. And you definitely are a wordsmith, something I haven't seen here before. Very evocative, even if I'm not exactly sure what it means.
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